Final Products and Feedback (B2)



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Feedback response:

The feedback for my documentary was very positive as all of the responses contained some positive feedback. The responders seemed to like my script and said that it was very interesting to listen to and hear the facts behind the clubs recent history, another responder commented on the audio quality, saying it was good. There was also some feedback on things I could improve, as two different responders mentioned how I slurred/stuttered my works sometimes throughout my documentary, this was mainly due to fatigue from such a long filming day (about 3 hours in total). Other critiques were on the editing and how it felt jumpy or choppy when cutting between sentences, this is due to the editing and filming, as sometimes I wouldn't restart my sentence if I misspoke during filming, which led to choppier editing in the final product. If I were to re-film my documentary, making sure that I don't mess up my lines would be the biggest priority as it would lead to a less jumpy final edit. My own critisism of my work is that I think the script is unfinished as I wish I included more about the new owner and what his plans for the future are, if I were to redo the whole thing, I think I would've started in the 2008/09 season when Ellis Short took over Sunderland, rather than starting in the 2013/14 season like I did, I would've also mentioned the current regeneration project that the city of Sunderland is going through. Overall however, I do think I did a decent job at meeting the brief and making a good and interesting documentary.






 

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