B2 creative industry response

Feedback: Feedback response: The feedback for my documentary was very positive as all of the responses contained some positive feedback. The responders seemed to like my script and said that it was very interesting to listen to and hear the facts behind the clubs recent history, another responder commented on the audio quality, saying it was good. There was also some feedback on things I could improve, as two different responders mentioned how I slurred/stuttered my works sometimes throughout my documentary, this was mainly due to fatigue from such a long filming day (about 3 hours in total). Other critiques were on the editing and how it felt jumpy or choppy when cutting between sentences, this is due to the editing and filming, as sometimes I wouldn't restart my sentence if I misspoke during filming, which led to choppier editing in the final product. If I were to re-film my documentary, making sure that I don't mess up my lines would be the biggest priority as it would lead ...

These are the responses to my first drafts of my documentary, I made a survey asking if they liked the draft and what they would change if I was to make another draft. I will review these responses and take their advice when I make my final draft.   This is my first draft of my outro, it features many of Sunderland AFCs greatest moments from the 21st century. In the first draft I have tried to make an outro that would evoke emotion and pride in Sunderland fans, which is why I included the most important and memorable moments, backed by the song 'Beginning of the twist' by the Futureheads, which is a song by a band from Sunderland. I decided on this song as it used to be played before every Sunderland home match during the 2010s which makes it a memorable song from this period of the clubs history.  This is the link to the first draft of my outro: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_3Ci1_z3ug First draft focus group - Outro Sunderland documentary outro first draft - focus g...

This is my PowerPoint of the production diary:

 THESE ARE COLLECTION OF LEGAL AND IFORMATIONAL DOCUMENTS FOR THE PROPUSES OF MY DOCUMENTARY This form is to show that the people/companies in my documentary have consented to featuring in it, this is necessary because it shows that both parties understand what the film will be used for and that they wont copyright claim the video, otherwise I could be sued. This form is a list of recourses I require for the production of my documentary, its just a simple list for logistical reasons showing what I need to film my interviews, where its located and if I have acquired it. As you can here I have acquired all my recourses. This form is a personnel list which is used for tracking who will be involved in the production and what their role in the production will be, I am labelled as the director, editor and set designer, with my dad being the camera man and the other set designer. This form is a location release form which is needed to show proof of consent from the land owner to show that...

This is the final draft of the script for my documentary written out in Microsoft Word: This is my script written out in Celtx as it is a more professional format for a script: https://www.celtx.com/auth/public/resource/s7s20ex1 This is the Storyboard for my documentary:  Music for the Documentary: Seven nation army - The White stripes  Dance of the knights - Sergey Prokofiev Love will tear us apart - Joy division  Power - Kanye West  Black Skinhead - Kanye West  Ready to go - Republica  Beginning of the twist - The Futureheads Found footage for the documentary: Any found footage or video clips that are going to be in my documentary will be pulled off of YouTube and inserted into my documentary. I am planning on using clips such as game highlights, interviews, arial footage of stadiums, archived footage from the cities past etc... I also have a few clips that I have filmed myself, such as the final shot of the video where the whole crowd is singing wise me...

Pitch presentation PowerPoint: Pitch Presentation Video and feedback: Pitch presentation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjcb0uQ5tjo Feedback response: The feedback for my pitch was overwhelmingly positive and complimentary as they all thought that my idea for my documentary was interesting and detailed. There was no critisism in their responses, however if I were to change something about it myself, I would mention the way I am going to present the documentary as I plan to speak directly at the camera for most of the video in a monologue style fashion. I am overall pleased with the way that my pitch has turned out and am glad to see everyone's positive responses to my idea, I look forward to making my pitch into a full documentary.